воскресенье, 11 сентября 2011 г.

Dear Bairma Vladimirovna,
Greetings, What news at you?I liked your history about animals.By way of gratuity I want to tell to you very much a fascinating story.I would like to tell you about my favorite story by James Joyce.It is history about mutual relations of main personages.That you would understand about mutual relations I will describe heroes is better.
Every personage of this story is interesting and bright.Main personages produced different types of people.Mrs Mooney is a big imposing woman.She governs the house cunningly and firmly.It was the good-natured woman.Mrs Mooney is very chummy with people in the Boarding house.But she is an outraged mother.She is strict to her daughter Polly.Mrs Mooney takes her daughter home again and set her to do homework.Also Mrs Mooney is a clever mother.She worries about the reputation of the family.Polly is the daughter.She is a slim girl of nineteen.She has light soft hair and a small full mouth.Her eyes are gray.Polly is very lively the intention to give her the run of the young man/Polly flirts with the young men.She hasn`t any experience and wisdom.Her naivety is connected with her age. Polly is a strange girl.Probably that she is extremely curious.Mr Doran is thirty-four or thirty-five years old.He takes advantage of Polly`s youth and inexperience.He divines the intention behind Polly`s mother tolerance.Mr Doran hasn't resisted temptation.He magnifies his sin.But he is a deсent man because he will get married to Polly.
On the whole,the story makes me think about behaviors of the bosom and take a right solution.I recommend this story to readers of any ages,most of all,students because this story teaches us to be wise and bear the brunt.This story has an exciting plot which is true to life.Looking forward to your comments.I appreciate your opinion.
Your sincerely,
Tanya.

1 комментарий:

  1. Tanya, your letter is quite interesting to read. You've followed the rules of letter writing. Though there are some errors at the very beginning, i.e. instead of greetings you should say I'm glad to greet you! and any news instead of what news at you? In English it will sound awkward that's why try to use what they do. It's important. Besides, I will describe heroes is better you'd rather say describe heroes in details. It sounds good.
    Overall, your letter is a knockout! You've tried to express your own ideas and it's precious.
    WELL DONE!

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